What was good about it:
- The title was very clear
- The picture linked up very well with the title of the magazine (Front page)
- Colour scheme worked very well
- Made good use of space on the page (Front page)
What could have been done to improve it:
- The picture on the contents page stands out too much
- Not enough writing on the contents page
- The yellow colour on the contents page isn't really clear
With the comments ive absorbed from my fellow peers, I now know what i need to do to improve my magazine. I've realised my contents page needed to be as good as my front page too. I'll definitely take all these comments into consideration and will work on improving future magazines.
